Tuesday, 3 March 2015

Omaru creek

W.A.L.T: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Swimming, playing and  dancing at the creek. Back in the day people were having a lot of fun at Omaru creek,  yup I'm talking about that place that is now full of rubbish!  
What can you do to help clean the creek?  
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For writting Our task was to write an introduction of what was happing on thurstday afternoon at Omaru creek. We used a simple sentense a complax sentens and a quistion. It helped me alot with my writting and I thought I did a good job so check it out . 
My Partner talita thought I did a good job so she gave me a 4/4 and a 3/4. 

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