walt: find a fraction of a number
this week for maths problem solving we are learning to find a fraction of a number.
First I did the problem with pencil and paper to help me solve the problem. Cheeck
out how I solved my maths problem solveing.
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Wednesday, 4 November 2015
Tuesday, 27 October 2015
Maths problem solving
Walt: find equivalent fractions.
This weeks for maths problem solving its all about fraction. Did you know that you can
solve a fraction question by using time, divide pluses and take away. My buddy and I
had to think a lot because fractions can be very difficult to solve.
This weeks for maths problem solving its all about fraction. Did you know that you can
solve a fraction question by using time, divide pluses and take away. My buddy and I
had to think a lot because fractions can be very difficult to solve.
Thursday, 22 October 2015
Sand Diego zoo
Walt: Think about our purpose and reader by planning my recount.
San Diego zoo! I want to touch the animals, play with the animals and feed the animals, but I can’t, because these animals are on the internet. I feel so betrayed as watching the videos on the internet instead of real life, I wondered if it was a scam?
Hear is what I got, marked by Htet Htet.
Plan of my paragraph topics
1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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Talk about how it all started and visiting the animals on line.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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I really want to be there playing with the animals. Weird things they do .
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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how interesting the animals are and how bad it feels not to be there.
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the San Diego Zoo
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San Diego zoo! I want to touch the animals, play with the animals and feed the animals, but I can’t, because these animals are on the internet. I feel so betrayed as watching the videos on the internet instead of real life, I wondered if it was a scam?
This week for writing we were informed about going to the zoo....... on the internet.
When we were to write about how boring it is to watch the zoo from the internet, We hat to write a complex sentence, simple sentence and a complex question.
Hear is what I got, marked by Htet Htet.
| Introduction Rubric | ||||
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| Hook | My introduction is boring. It is difficult to read. | My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience. | My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more. | When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more. |
| Orientation | My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about. | My audience has some idea about what I am writing about. | My audience is clear what I am writing about. | My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing. |
Friday, 16 October 2015
What is grassland
Walt:Walt: summarise information into presentations
This terms topic is survivers so Mr goodwin gave every group a different place and ours were grassland. It was pretty cool. I learnt that in grassland there are less trees and plants. Grasslands are in certain places like farms and many more.
Fear factor 2015
Walt: THink about my purpose and reader by planning my recount
Fear factor the most hardest, scariest and unbelievable game. Mr goodwin the most craziest teacher off all the worlds has made us do challenges like chicken flavored worms, head band challenge, egg race and now fear factor. There are four contestants, me, hosea, Inez and christian. Our crazy teacher says we have to eat frog eggs and pond water. I was sure he was lying but I was still afraid . He brings in the food and with relief I say YES!.
This week Mr good had made us do a challenge called fear factor. There were four contestants that had to drink pond water and eat frog eggs. As I was one of the four contestants I was more than scared but I also knew That it was one of Mr goodwin's tricks.
Wednesday, 16 September 2015
What is Onomatopoeia
WALT: We are learning to use onomatopoeia to help create interest in our writing.
This week we are learning to use onomatopoeia in our writting. Here is a
example of what onomatopoeia. Onomatopoeia is something that describs
and action word, objects and many more.
As I was walking down the street OUCH, I say as someone bumbs into me
This week we are learning to use onomatopoeia in our writting. Here is a
example of what onomatopoeia. Onomatopoeia is something that describs
and action word, objects and many more.
As I was walking down the street OUCH, I say as someone bumbs into me
Tuesday, 15 September 2015
Year five and six market day
Walt: write an interesting and detailed recount
It was Friday morning and there I was at school, while walking I remembered it was market day. Selling and buying, that's all that was happening. Suddenly , I check to see if I brang my product, I surely didn't want to let my team down. When looking down I sighed with relief, my product was in my bag.
Snif snif snif what is that I smell. I realised it was the aroma coming from homeware candles. Every team had set up everything ready to go for the trade and enterprise 2015 market day. I so excited that I stayed near the porch until morning tea finished. We were all there for a reason, to sell buy and make money. There wasn't just homeware but also jewellery, stationery, music and toys. Every group had their products it was all so exciting.
Finally it was time, My group and I decided it that I will sell first and they will buy. I had an idea to start doing a add to entertain people to our candles. We have made six orange candles, and sixteen skull faced candles. Entertaining people for our candles were working, Later on the whole selling thing became a challenge, The other homeware group challenged us to see who can make the most money, Challenge accepted.
When selling the products I realised our product was easily disappearing one by one. After some time I was informed that we were making a lot of money/ pts and pieces. While selling the products I couldn't wait to start buying before everything was out of order. I was really interested in the popsicle sticks and knew that there were a lot of fans. I was feeling too excited staring at people eating and licking the popsicle sticks, one of my team mates bought everyone in our group tiny popsicle stick, but I thought that was NOT enough.
“Half time”, says Mr S. I was now free to buy my popsicle stick. When happily getting there they were all sold out. With my head down I felt very very sad, I put my head up and there I see cute cupcakes that looked kinda like pandas. I enjoyed it as it went it my mouth it was delicious. I ate my cupcake in front of the popsicle lovers, showing off. I couldn’t finish my cupcake, so I gave it to my friend. I started to tour around and admire such things like maths book covers, loom band Jewellery, drums, ukuleles, a variety of food and different kinds of toys.
After a hard day of shopping and selling it was time for market day to end. Having fun and enjoying market day made me more than happy, But ending it made me sad. We then had to count our money and that frown turned upside down. We made fifteen pts, even though we made a little I was happy for my team and me. But I myself was still enemies with the popsicle loves.
Recount Writing
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4
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Write for my reader
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I've tried to think about my reader
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My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
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My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
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My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
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Purpose
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I tried to meet the purpose
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My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
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The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
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My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
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Introduction
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My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
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My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
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My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction wows my reader!
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Paragraph Topics
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My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
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I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
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My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
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My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.
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Wednesday, 2 September 2015
Adverbs
Walt: use adverbs in our sentence
This week for literacy Mrs Tito made a presentation for us to do to learn about
auxiliary verbs. First it was abit hard to make up verbs but at the end it
all worked out. Luckily I finished the presentation and int time posted on my blog.
Monday, 31 August 2015
Maths problem solving
Walt: multiply and divide decimals numbers
For this weeks maths problem solving we are learning to times and divide
decimals. My buddy Seini and I found out that we can get our answer by
multiplying and divideing.
For this weeks maths problem solving we are learning to times and divide
decimals. My buddy Seini and I found out that we can get our answer by
multiplying and divideing.
Maths problem solving
Walt: multiply and divide decimal numbers
This week for maths problem solving we are learning to multiply and divide
decimal numbers. My buddy and I thought that our task was going to be hard.
After reading the problems we realised that it was times and divide and many more that could help solve our problem. Here is a link to my buddys blogSeini. Have a look at our maths problem solving.
What could it be?
Walt:use our inferencing skills to find meaning in the text.
At the beach
I saw some ---------------------------
laughing and making fun of me.
There eyes stare at me asking me to go away,
and they bug people for free food.
Underneth their sand castle though,
I see round, spotted eggs.
Have a guess and tell me what could it be?
Friday, 28 August 2015
Vocabulary
Walt: use the words related to the story to write our own sentences.
This week we are learning to use vocabulary in our sentences. Mr Goodwin says that we have to practice using vocab in our writing. Our goal was to buddy up and use some words to write a sentence that explains what the word means.
Friday, 21 August 2015
Amazing Loofahs
Walt: Learn and use new Vocab.

this week for literacy we are learning to learn to use vocab. We had to read a book about loofahs and write about it. It felt like writing and doing a advertisement. loofahs are known as scrubbers and they grow as plants Crazy right!
Wednesday, 19 August 2015
math problem solving week 5
Walt: multiply and divide whole nubers
This week for our maths problem solving we are learning how to divide and multiply
whole nubers to find the answer. I was really happy about this weeks problem solving
because times tables and dividing is something I am good at. Hopefully I get all the answers
right.
This week for our maths problem solving we are learning how to divide and multiply
whole nubers to find the answer. I was really happy about this weeks problem solving
because times tables and dividing is something I am good at. Hopefully I get all the answers
right.
Auxlilary verbs
WALT: We are learning about auxiliary verbs and using them in sentences.
This week for literacy we had Mrs Tito. Her idea was to teach us how to use auxiliary verbs in our sentence. First I did not get it at all but after listening to Mrs Tito
it was quite easy
Thursday, 13 August 2015
Advice blog
Walt:think critically about what we read
this week for litresy we are doing an advice blog. We have to give advice
to someone who needs help. This is the person who needs help his name is james able and he want to buy a fitness watch. I have to help him decide witch watch he should buy, the fitbit or the garmen.
Tuesday, 4 August 2015
Rima's Biodiversity!
Rima Biodiversity from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
This is my Biodiversity animation. My two animals are thresher Shark and a blue Whale. I hope you enjoy my movie
Monday, 3 August 2015
Maths problem solving
Walt: add and subtract decimals
This week my partner Seini and I did maths problem solving week three. We decide
that I do the first slide and she does the second slide. We had to add and subtract
decimals to get our answer, I had to add and she had to subtracr. Seini and I thought
it was quite easy.
This week my partner Seini and I did maths problem solving week three. We decide
that I do the first slide and she does the second slide. We had to add and subtract
decimals to get our answer, I had to add and she had to subtracr. Seini and I thought
it was quite easy.
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Advertisement for beans bags, 3pts whole day
Walt: pursued the reader to agree with our message
Bean bags for hire
Its comfitiable, it's helpful yup its the well known bean bags.
Sitting on hairy, dirty carpets and uncomfortable chairs is not what I want to do. Luckily the year five and six block have something better than dirty, hairy and uncomfortable, you guessed it its two new bean bags. Its comfortable, it's easy to sit on and you only need 3 pts, It is so comfortable that it will become your best friend.
The bean bags are filled with soft ,white, fake beans so that means if you want to play with snow but it never snows just tear it apart and you will have hot snow. You might be wondering how the bean bag is so comfortable? well that rubber skin you're leaning on is what make the bean bags very comfortable. Are you some of the people who move a lot well the bean bag can turn into any shape that is suitable for you.
The bean bags comes in a lot of colors but we decide it to pick the color of the slippery grass and the bright sky. It is the most amazing colors you will ever see.
Like I informed you on my introduction that with only 3pts you will have a new best friend. Our company have just been informed that if you pay three pts you can have the bean bag for the whole day yup for the whole day. You can also show off by sitting down on the relaxing and comfortable bean bag while your friends sits down on the hairy floor.
Remember for only three Pts the bean bag is yours. Heres a tip from the professionals come really early to school so you don't need to argue with your friend about whos going to be on the bean bag. Just 3pts and it's all yours.
Today room six reading and writting class we learning how to write a advertisment to puseud people to bying the bean bags to sit on. The bean bags coest three doolers to sit on for a whole day. I used some words around the class room to write my advertisement. The main thing we had to do was re craft the writting Mr Goodwin wrote and try to make it sound better.
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Friday, 31 July 2015
Kauri trees
Walt: put ourselves into the text
This week our task was to create and advertisement about furniture made out of
kauri trees. First we had to get images of kauri trees then get a picture of the furniture
made out of Kauri trees, tell how much it cost and write a advertisement that
will get viewers to by the furniture.
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