Omaru creek

W.A.L.T: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Swimming, playing and  dancing at the creek. Back in the day people were having a lot of fun at Omaru creek,  yup I'm talking about that place that is now full of rubbish!  

What can you do to help clean the creek?  

For writting Our task was to write an introduction of what was happing on thurstday afternoon at Omaru creek. We used a simple sentense a complax sentens and a quistion. It helped me alot with my writting and I thought I did a good job so check it out . 

My Partner talita thought I did a good job so she gave me a 4/4 and a 3/4.